Vacation time
Vacation Time
Last weekend I and my friends went to Cha-Am beach. We go by train.When we get there, we find accommodation for the night.And then we have home stay for tonight It cost 2500 bath. We agree with this cost. Although the weather is bad because have a storm. We can go swimming at the beach but we have a little bit time.
In the evening we set up seafood for party this night. When party come to everyone is very happy some people dancing and some people hangout then we go to bed
In the morning we go to see sun rise. The weather in this day is very good after to see sun rise. We go to ride bicycles and come to swimming at the beach. In the afternoon we have lunch and go to train station for come back home
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